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!CBCA Short list Judging Reflection!

This term in Library we got the chance to judge the CBCA shortlist information books. Now I am about to state the Good Layout criteria:

  • The Layout MUST be clear. (More reasons underneath)
  • The font needs to be easy to read (style & size) or the reader would drop it and nobody would understand
  •   Shouldn’t have too much written on the page. Or your reader will drop the book. Out of no interest
  • You need to make sure that the blurb matches the content. So their expectations are as good as the reality.

That is only the Layout and the is still more criteria to that.

Now here comes the visuals this is extremely important because this is what attracts readers. VISUALS:

  • It should include lots of pictures if you are posing this to children under 7 they probably won’t find it attractive.
  • The visuals MUST match the text or else the reader will get quite confused.
  • You need colour somewhere to make your book visually appealing.
  • Don’t put to much detail it is going to distract the reader. Visuals should be simple not complicated.

That’s all for visuals since information is so important I am only going to list a few. Here it comes. Info:

  • Detailed or the reader won’t completely understand 
  • Accurate 
  • Up to date
  • Gets to the point.

My winner in the CBCA shortlist drumroll please (drumroll in  the background) 

Make believe!!!  This book is my winner because it teaches you how to do mind tricks. My second reason is it also gives your mind a bit of a kick. 3rd is would you rather spend your time learning and drawing or read really small words in a book that has nearly 1 million of words it’s obvious what you would choose.

Are you learning or killing your brain trying to read tiny words.

Book post the 2nd

Hello world,

It’s been quite a long time since I’ve last posted. Now I am going to catch you up on what I am reading. Questions

My favourite genre is fantasy and adventure like Harry Potter. 

I would recommend this book to anybody who loves magic and fantasy.

I am recommending this because it will just describe the book so well that you would get sucked into the book. Here is a book that is mentioned in the book. What is your favourite Tale and why?

To Future Year 4

Dear Future year 4’s

I know you are coming to up to Year 4 this year I know you have a while to next year but here are some things you will need for next year:

  • The knowledge you learnt this year because even though year 4 will teach you new knowledge you still can’t learn without pre-knowledge.
  • You will need the will to achieve your goals when you are in year 4. When you get to the top the view is beautiful.
  • You will need your friends 👬to help you get through the hard times and they can help you make new friends 👭.

Now that you know what you need I can tell you what to look forward to even if you aren’t looking forward to it every cloud ☁️ has a silver lining. So here is 2 things to look forward to:

  • Year 4 camp. I know I was nervous but I still had a great time. We did hut building and even a little bit of cooking which I know you have been doing that too.
  • You will love the nativity play I never got the role I wanted but that’s a different story. You’ll get to play in front of older people (adults) and year 3s or 2s.

A time I laughed was when “Gabriel” our anger flapped his hands up and down I thought it was hilarious.

A time when I was challenged was when we had to build a hut out of sticks my hut was covered with leaves 🍃 🍁 🍂.

We still got a tiny bit wet.

I am proud of how good I am at maths in the challenge sheet.

I always remember Mrs Haines saying don’t use the algorithm.

I wonder what you will achieve in year 4. 

Merry Christmas 🎄.

Nativity

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Science experiment Reflection

At the start of the experiment 🧪 I was worried about not bringing all the materials. When we were checking that all materials were accounted for. I asked one of my partners if she brought her share of her materials. Here is where I was when I started panicking. She didn’t bring it. Thank goodness that there was spare White Vinegar and a soap dispenser. We started our experiment. Soon there was a new worry somehow everyone in an ear shot heard we had coke involved in the experiment.

We were filming. I closed the iPad for a few minutes. Now it was time to film. As we were narrating what was happening the wind started to blow I was worried that our containers were going to flip! So I quickly stopped filming.

We finally finished our experiment and time to record the results on to keynote. Now because of our changes with the metal we had to change our whole entire project from aluminium(AL) to nickel (NI). So that went wonderful (not!).

Now we are now working on the conclusion.

Our final service

Hello World I am extremely happy that we had done this, I feel like a helpful member of society under here there will be my reflection on this project I kinda also feel quite sad that we finally finished after all that we went through. Ok first question.

-What inspired you during the project ?

Something that inspired me during the project was that I would be proud about helping people indeed

-What did you find challenging ?

I found trying to pull the needle through my blanket without poking myself challenging.

– what did you enjoy during the project ?

I enjoyed finally pitching in and I felt like part of the community.

-What new knowledge do you now have about homelessness?

Some new knowledge I learnt about homelessness is that they think more about a home instead of food & toiletries. 

-Explain how you determined the appropriate size of the blanket.

We measured adults heights then we got the average height for the male and female. 

-How did we decide what fabric to use?

We had to test the insulation & leak, soak & repel.

🙂!Thank you for reading our final service!🙂

Author Visit

Hello world before 10:30am on the 19/9/2019 we meet comedian author Oliver Phommavanh you pronounce it Pom- a- van. We drew faces like: Happy 😃, angry 😡, sad ☹️, scared 😧, evil 😈, crazy 😜, cool 😎 and nerd 🤓. Then we wrote a story about a new kid called BOB then after wrote our perspective we wrote BOB’s perspective. After that Oliver Phommavanh told us how to get ideas for stories: 1. Write about something you love 2. Write about your life 3. Read to steal borrow ideas forever ♾.

Please go to Oliver Phommavanh’s website here!

Times tables progress

Hello world 🌎,

In term 2 we had a times tables graph to record our accuracy in our level of times table. I personally had mixed times tables. I loved doing them here is a photo of my graph.  I felt quite comfortable with my results.

 

Community blog post

       Here are some questions I am about to answer.

-why are we doing this?

We do this to help the Salvation Army.

-What chores are you doing?

We do extra chores just say you clean your room then you could clean a younger siblings room 

-any P.L.As that you have you used and how throughout this process 

I think I used connectedness because I had to think about how much more money we had to raise for these poor people.

-How was your visit from the Salvation Army 

We were extremely lucky 🍀 that that they came.

They told us that they help rough sleepers.

They also help people who face homelessness get jobs to avoid homelessness. They also help people who are young and homeless get a home. They told us that we could help by making blankets because they already have enough to worry about. So we accepted their challenge.

-What happened in the science 🧪 excursion.

We first we sorted out if things like jelly beans were made from.

Then we made a gelatine pad it’s what film 🎞 is made of.

Then we set materials on 🔥 FIRE 🔥 to see which one is the most flammable.

Thank you for listening!

See you soon

Materials

In science 🧫 this term we are investigating the properties of wood’s different materials and how they affect their use.

Along with our blog buddies we discussed and described various natural materials.

Click the link below to see our findings.

Can you think of another material in my book’s category.
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